Tarzan
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Good morning...my big neighbor....I shot this yesterday morning...your comments are so much appreciated...
Thank you.
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GREENWIZARD
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very pretty & i love the dof
however i feel the yellow flower is very dominant in the frame & distracts your attention away from the main subject ....think i'd crop/clone it out
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Gilly
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Fantastic DOF, and great colouring.......
I agree with GW though, and the out of focus yellow flower does pull the eye away from the subject a bit.
I'd not clone or crop it out though - i'd probably just burn it in PS a little to take the edge off it... (i think)
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creators
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I am not sure I agree about the big yellow, I like the story, and whilst this is a good shot, macros of flowers are kind of two a penny, whereas this shot has the big neighbour thing going on which appeals to me a lot. So I think nicely spotted and nicely done.
edit: Just to add a bit more. I keep coming back to have another look at this shot because I really like the high tension between the foreground flower and the big yellow. I like this shot more and more as I look at it.
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Tarzan
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thanks so much for your kind compliments and your advices. Actually the big yellow flower was there on purpose. I do have another shot without the yellow one. your further comments appreciated. Thanks.
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| Tarzan wrote: | thanks so much for your kind compliments and your advices. Actually the big yellow flower was there on purpose. I do have another shot without the yellow one. your further comments appreciated. Thanks.
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fantastic photo
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Gilly
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WOW........ awesome shot Tarzan - this is sweet as!
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GREENWIZARD
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i think this one is a little soft compared to your 1st post
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