Blue
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Self-portrait with mirror
Could I please get some thoughts and critique on this?
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Venom
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Hey Blue,
Now this is interesting, I love the idea seen similar before but you've put a new twist to it (body angled and mirror raised).
For me the lighting looks a little harsh on your right arm and you've cut your elbow off, but apart from that I think it's great.
Mike
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Blue
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Thanks Mike. I was kind of waiting to see if anyone would mention the elbow.. it's bothering me, too, and the light- you are right. I had exactly the same thoughts. Think I'll try and re-shoot this to get it perfect. 
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hil26
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| Blue wrote: | | Think I'll try and re-shoot this to get it perfect. |
and when you do, well it should be a cracker, as I love the whole concept of it
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Venom
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| Blue wrote: | | Thanks Mike. I was kind of waiting to see if anyone would mention the elbow.. it's bothering me, too, and the light- you are right. I had exactly the same thoughts. Think I'll try and re-shoot this to get it perfect. |
It's well worth doing again as it'll be a cracking shot. Look forward to seeing the results.
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creators
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I like the whole concept of this picture, agree with the elbow crit, but I like high contrast B&W pics and so like this one. The arm is overdone, but I'd only like to see it brought back a bit as I really like this stuff.
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